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Night
Contributed by
bob18dylan
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Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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In colors of black, stars wander about
trying to find the moon
The place to rest their spirit
in this black lagoon
But with no moon in sight
they decide to light
right where they stand
and sleep away this black night
To continue later this journey on hand
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bob18dylan
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2005-07-25 23:35:55]
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Re: Night
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:45:41 PM AEST
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Im always looking at the desert night skies and this gave me a different way of looking at the stars very serene and beautiful
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Re: Night
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:10:43 AM AEST
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Ah, the celestial stars. Many nights of my life have been spent looking upwards at them. I believe for every star there is a spirit looking down. The falling stars are spirits coming back to earth to live another lifetime. This is a beautiful write.
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Re: Night
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:59:47 PM AEST
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| I used to look at the stars all the time.. I remember being in love with them.. they were just so beautiful.. But, I got older and hardly ever looked at them anymore... Now, you have reminded me about this beauty.. So, you can count that I would be tonight. |
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Re: Night
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by mom11159 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 08:23:55 AM AEST
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I loved reading this magical poem, love the stars, you have done a excellent job with this your words so captivating your imagery so perfect, great job
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