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Clock Watching
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 08:13:26 PM in AEST
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In syncopated rhythm
My heart’s marking off the hour
With the clock upon the wall
That somehow seems to have the power
Of extending every moment
Till the whistle blows at five
And my heart beats now so slowly
Will I make it out alive?
Hurry whistle!! Get here faster
Beat the clock and end this day
Though my heart has not yet stopped
I am so fearful that it may
Are the hands moving more slowly?
Could they move yet slower still?
To be perfectly honest
Of this day, I’ve had my fill
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2005-07-25 20:13:26]
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Re: Clock Watching
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 08:47:34 PM AEST
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The work hours on Mondays and Fridays always seemed to double to me. I was never ready for Monday to begin with and Fridays I just wanted to end so many i would have a couple hours of weekend before another horrid Monday. Great work, Naz.
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Re: Clock Watching
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by freckle on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 09:42:32 PM AEST
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Aww Naz, I feel for you! My Monday was moving so slow I asked if I could go home early...boss said yes! Woot! Hope your Tuesday is better!
Carol |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:42:34 PM AEST
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lol and except for today get this one Monday is my Friday at work that really sucks argggg
I loved the way you brought the clock ticking that image was great I could see you there just waiting for it to be five |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:45:51 PM AEST
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| awwwwww my poor DM Rainy days and mondays .. always get me down too .. nice rhyming pattern. I started to say rhythem ..but I never learned the rythem method .. ritflmao. Sorry if this offends anyone that reads your mail .. ya remember the poem I wrote you about Seattle Rain? I lost it when my son dumped my computer ... do you have it??? :-( |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 03:36:59 AM AEST
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Hmm i so know what you mean. I hate Mondays it always makes me blue. Don't you just love work LOL.
A wonderful poem Nazzy.
Jane~ |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:46:19 AM AEST
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| great as always naz |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:50:45 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this - so true, not only for work but school as well. Your rhyme scheme is excellent and didn't seem forced at all. Nice work. Blessings, J. |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by seci on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:22:21 PM AEST
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| i like this poem , i am going to print it out and put it on my wall and everytime i feel like the hours are going slow then i will read that poem. oh i hate mondays too.don't feel bad. but i really like this poem.nice writing skills as well |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by seci on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:23:07 PM AEST
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| i like this poem , i am going to print it out and put it on my wall and everytime i feel like the hours are going slow then i will read that poem. oh i hate mondays too.don't feel bad. but i really like this poem.nice writing skills as well |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by seci on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:23:13 PM AEST
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| i like this poem , i am going to print it out and put it on my wall and everytime i feel like the hours are going slow then i will read that poem. oh i hate mondays too.don't feel bad. but i really like this poem.nice writing skills as well |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:53:18 PM AEST
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lol its funny about mondays i like mondays.
ok thats the only day i have off work is monday.
:P
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Re: Clock Watching
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 06:41:04 PM AEST
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Come on now, Nazz. Some things in life you just must wait for. Good work, though. You've a talent for composing good lines on just about anything.
Andrew
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Re: Clock Watching
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:12:32 AM AEST
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I like this, though I wished there was more of it. It seems to short to me.
Lol. I know how much you hate Mondays, I can really imagine you like this.
Heehee. You'll be fine..
Nice write Nazzy.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Clock Watching
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:08:52 PM AEST
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Oh yes I remember those days. It was as if the clock owned time, or at least it felt like time owned you. For me every evening is a Friday and everyday is a Saturday.
Sorry, not trying to rub it in, just been there done that. But I can empathize.
A fun write my friend,
Will |
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