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I Didn't Jump
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:25:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I stood on the edge
Crying things over
Right there on the edge
Thoughts painful and sober
Just two feet from the edge
Two feet from my death
Back away from the edge
Slowly catch my breath
Another night I didn’t jump
Another day I have to live
Never take for granted what you got
Or what you have to give
Copyright ©
blue_angel
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2005-07-25 15:25:06]
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Re: I Didn't Jump
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by Randyjohnson on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:36:09 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It may help those who are contemplating suicide. |
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Re: I Didn't Jump
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:45:36 PM AEST
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| Good job! something that helped me was a nurse reminding me that attempting suicide is showing those around you; family members and others that suicide is a way to cope with life .. I hadn't thought of it in that way before .. and I had a grandaughter that was already cutting herself to cope with life .. what an ass I was being . Now I get counselling and use more positive means to try and solve my problems .. writing is one means .. and writes like yours help too .. thanks. |
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Re: I Didn't Jump
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by darkcutterBree on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:09:26 PM AEST
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| this is so good..it liek sticks out to me. you hav a very good minds eye. keep it up |
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Re: I Didn't Jump
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:31:22 AM AEST
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Jennie,
this is a very emotional write with a deep message in it !!!! I am glad you "caught your breath "because you have so much talent and so much insight and love to give!!!!!! Great write
Leia36 |
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Re: I Didn't Jump
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:28:50 AM AEST
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| hey this poem is awesome, and i know the feeling of stopping... talent like yours shouldnt be wasted |
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