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Life Is You
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:56:24 AM in AEST
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Inexpressible love
From a heart that is true
Uncontrollable love
As my heart burns for you
An undeniable love
With emotions so true
Warm thoughts of joy
My heart sings for you
Thoughts filled with love
In the words that I write
A perfect love
With you as my wife
You dressed in white
My heaven so true
The first thought I had
Is when do I say “I do”
A ring on my figure
With vows that are true
This ring on my figure
That says I love you
Purity and honesty
Our lies are no more
My vow is to love you
Till death opens its door
So together forever
Our lives will remain
Together forever
Till are dieing day
I Love You My Lea-Ann
~Steve~
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sride686
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2005-07-25 11:56:24]
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Re: Life Is You
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by LolaWhite on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:12:57 PM AEST
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I love this poem babe...perhaps it is because it is for me. :) It is beautiful and I love the reinstated vow you made to me in it. I love you so very much and the best thing I ever did was say "I do" on December 28th 2002. Thank you for sharing your love for me with the world.
Purity and honesty
Our lies are no more
My vow is to love you
Till death opens its door
This is a lovely stanza with great flow. It all brought a tear to my eye. Thank you again for a beautiful write to me. I love you!!
Your little
LW
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Re: Life Is You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:12:45 PM AEST
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U nailed it steve, but don't take my word, ask your wife, lol. one of your best luck 2u both . . .
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Re: Life Is You
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful statement of love and cherished committment. Bless you both and the baby too.
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Re: Life Is You
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:56:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful declaration and reaffirmation of love, Steve..Well done!
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