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Heat Lightning
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
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Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:12:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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In the heat of an August evening,
as the sun sets, and the stars begin to glow.
A muggy cloud of uncertainty fills the air,
and flashes of light begin to illuminate
the naive sky.
It is no storm, for there is no rain,
not even thunder to accompany the light.
And yet, like a young and innocent child,
we wonder if something is on the horizon.
As if this heat lightning is a prelude
to a bigger and better symphony
of rain and thunder.
We will always wonder
what secrets the heat lightning holds.
Copyright ©
thepizzaguy
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2005-07-25 11:12:06]
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:18:37 AM AEST
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| Mother Nature has so many beautiful sights to view. This was a beautiful and dreamy write. Much peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:54:24 PM AEST
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I got some good imagery while reading this...A rather unique topic too...I like that. Nice job!
Scorp. |
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 08:23:21 PM AEST
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I love the shows put on by heat lightning. Where I live we get the fronts pushing down from the north and the fronts pushing up from the Gulf and it meets right over us. Many nights we have sat and watched it. Sometimes it is almost as beautiful as the lights of the Aurora Borealis.
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 08:56:42 PM AEST
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I once lived in Florida, the lightening capitol of the world- and saw A LOT of heat lightening-
an awesome site it is:
"we wonder if something is on the horizon.
As if this heat lightning is a prelude
to a bigger and better symphony
of rain and thunder"
picturesque and lively few lines.. these
B
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:40:26 PM AEST
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Oh! I like this! Heat lightning is extraordinary, isn't it? You've done well here in describing the atmosphere, the awe and the (I'd never put this word to it before but yes! it absolutely works...) secrets that lie in the dark just beyond the flashes. It - and this - is... an energizing experience.
Terrific write!
~Snem |
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 02:12:44 AM AEST
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This is an awsome write....You are really good at writing these nature poems.. Keep them up!!
Jenni |
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:16:19 PM AEST
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| wow!! this is good!! im jealous of your skills woth writing!!!. keep up the good work... but slow down a little... i am not that fast at commenting.... 10 down....and....the rest to go!!!...lol |
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Re: Heat Lightning
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by Inevitable on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:47:48 AM AEST
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heat lightening
interesting.
Seems like it would be nice to see.
I liked the part about "...a bigger and better symphony of rain and thunder."
Great write! |
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