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tears
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 08:41:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i can't remember
the last time i cried
instead of showing my feelings
i lock them up inside
even when my heart's breaking
you won't see a sign
as i leave no trace of pain
on this face of mine
mountains of tears
are there just beyond my eyes
never being released
and turned into cries
my sadness is kept secret
in my heart's protected vault
it is well guarded
under lock and bolt
but without my tears
to wash away the pain
my sorrow's still here
my depression's sustained
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xXxmegsxXx
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2005-07-25 08:41:35]
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Re: tears
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:45:37 AM AEST
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A wonderful write, tears have a way of washing the soul. I can see the tears in your writing.
Blessings
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Re: tears
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by bruised_angel on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:56:56 PM AEST
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| i feel the pain in this poem so sorry but its a great write |
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Re: tears
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:07:30 AM AEST
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| very touching and true, great write keep it up. gemma |
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