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Take me Home
Contributed by
broken_wingz
on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:23:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I met the most beautiful little girl one day,
She was the prettiest thing I've seen.
She had rich brown chocolate eyes
With just the slightest hint of green.
Her hair was like the finest silk
Just a shade lighter than her eyes.
Her nose was fine and straight
And pointed slightly toward the skies.
Her lips were shaped like a tiny bow
In a gorgeous shade of pink.
But there was something else about this child
That made me stop to think.
As I looked around I became confused
For this beautiful girl was alone.
I just couldn't understand why
Someone would forget to take her home.
Who would abandon this little girl?
Whose life holds so much hope?
The sadness brought by all these questions
Leaves me unable to cope.
Over and over again I wish
For answers to the questions known.
I just want someone to tell me,
Why no one took me home.
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broken_wingz
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2005-07-25 04:23:44]
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Re: Take me Home
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by grin69 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:23:23 AM AEST
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| Hello. This is so sad. I was abandoned as a child and I've never really gotten over it. I always felt like I wasn't good enough. Anyways I loved this alot and I'm gonna go back and read some of your past poems. take care. |
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Re: Take me Home
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by Noelia on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:49:23 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, its so sad and cute! |
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Re: Take me Home
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by bruised_angel on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:13:14 PM AEST
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| great poem so sad |
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