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The Note
Contributed by
Misunderstood_gurl
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Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:15:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You left with no word
No letter, only a note
‘I’m not coming back’
Is all you wrote
Why would you leave?
And do this to me?
I love you so much
Don’t you see?
Where did you go?
What did I do?
‘Cause all I ever did
Was love you
Didn’t you love me?
Or was it all just a lie
‘Cause we’ve been together forever
And you didn’t even say goodbye
What’s wrong with you?
How could you do this?
You probably won’t miss me
But you, I will miss
I just need you to tell me why
But you’re nowhere to be found
But it isn’t fair
‘Cause to your love, I am bound
It’s as if
I’m bound by chains
And it isn’t right
Because of all this pain
So why can’t you help me out?
And make me hate you
But the question is
Do you want to hate me too?
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Misunderstood_gurl
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Re: The Note
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by namesaretaken on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:22:37 PM AEST
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That is very sad to read about ....I hope you are O.K. nice write though
~nat~ |
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Re: The Note
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by grin69 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:23:48 AM AEST
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| hello. Oh my god! this happend to me!!! I drove 1 hr to visit a bf, when I got to his apartment it was totally empty! no note, no explanation, nothing! OUCH! Just like me, you will heal. grin |
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Re: The Note
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:02:05 PM AEST
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ouch. people are idiots. especially the 'you' in this poem. he shouldn't have hurt you like this. and i have been hurt many time... like this, but not even with a note. it hurts. but i'm still alive. so, just hang in there and talk to me if you need to. lots of luck!
~sprints
p.s. this was a good write (even through the pain), keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Note
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by needs_change on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:04:21 PM AEST
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| once again great write. people can be dicks. some are so ***** stupid and it's frustrating. i like also that the poem could have a different meaning. it could mean that someone you love walked out on ya or it could mean that someone you love took their own life. i really like that. as i said before. you are an awsome writer. keep the words coming. |
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