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Catfight
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:57:39 PM in AEST
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I am waiting for you...
Like a spider for the fly
Gonna get 'cha little girlie
for all your little lies
Best watch your back, bioch
You never know when I'll be there
Gonna hurt 'cha, that's what I said
Like I just don't care
You're a wicked one, you are
dumb as hell too
Little scaredy cat
when I yell BOO!
I saw you throw your punch, girl
you couldn't hurt a flea
better take a few lessons
for ya have to deal with me
Laura Horner
7-24-05
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Re: Catfight
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by CarolinaBlue on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:07:19 PM AEST
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Well this was definitely to the point and the anger and comtempt felt throughout every line, but very well written and flowed wonderfully...Have to say I've felt this way many times unfortunately.....
At least you could vent a little bit here.
~Blue~
(who's making a mental note never to cross hippienurse) ;-) |
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Re: Catfight
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:11:37 PM AEST
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OH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is one person in this world I would love to slap back into yesterday forever. I do know it is wrong, but some people just deserver it for they are so freaking ignorant.
Rita |
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Re: Catfight
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:47:21 AM AEST
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Oh So you have a little fire in the belly? I remember when I was younger I could think of a couple I'd like to disarm.........but when you get older, you just think.........why waste good time.
Great write, I felt your emotion, and I could see your fight!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Catfight
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by grin69 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:22:45 AM AEST
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| Hello. This is exactly how I feel about this one person...Just don't end up in jail or something over this person. ok? |
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Re: Catfight
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by Willofree on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:32:57 AM AEST
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Hi Laura,
Well maybe I'm not supposed to, but I was grinning when I read this write. Like it had a humorus slant to it, albeit there was the anger expressed as well....yet in an exagerated manner. Enough said, however, there are those who deserve a good kick in the------!
Well done, my friend
Will |
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Re: Catfight
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:33:27 PM AEST
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ummm LOL ... don't play a game of wits with anyone that's unarmed .. but if you need help I'm always ready for a good fight .. you know you can count on me .. ***** and batches .. I like to tie cats together by their tails and .. well; I've really devolped a mean streak ..
but just let me know ...... unless it's me you want to slap then ... just slap away I might deserve it ....... |
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Re: Catfight
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:26:35 PM AEST
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WOO HOO Laura!! Let it out woman! I can certainly relate quite well to this feeling...lol Love your expression in this write, I could feel your anger fully, but at the same time, had to giggle a bit because it was so damn good! All while keeping a great flow too; )
LOVE that last stanza...ROFL!!
Scorp. |
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Re: Catfight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:51:17 PM AEST
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Trust me it ain't worth it laura, they live 4 just
this type of varification, that u r like them and
no better, but r better, look at what u have,
and what u have, then look at what they don't
now who's realy better off?
u r a sucess in life and love, and as u know,
" SUCESS IS THE SWEETES REVENGE "
peace 2u my sister Laura . . .
((((((((((( Laura))))))))))
your friend Ben |
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Re: Catfight
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 09:23:25 PM AEST
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I know how difficult it would be but, 'killing' them with kindness will have them eating their heart out..
more so than beatin' the daylights out of them!
(though I know how gratifying it would feel to rub their face into the pavement)
Be above it all.. for you are.
B
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Re: Catfight
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by tommylover on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:43:08 PM AEST
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yes i do agree,
this little tiny flea,
when it lands,
don't let it be,
SQUASH IT
and watch it bleed!!
then we'll all be free
no more lies,
no more games
is what we please!!!
just a note from little ol' me :) |
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Re: Catfight
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:48:12 AM AEST
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| ok lol your so violent its funny you cant control yourself,and it really is pathetic u wana fight someone young enough to be your daughter,i pray for you and i hope your jealousy dies,and hopefully your maturity will grow,and laura im sorry but if you keep up with these threats i will be forced to get the law involved and im sure you dont want that,just take a chil pill and grow up please and think about your familly at 3 am not me |
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Re: Catfight
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:07:33 PM AEST
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| Blackholesun what in the world are you talking about. Is there something I missed here? Why do you think this is about you? Some kind of guilty conscience thing you've got going on? Maturity??? Who said this was labeled as a Mature Poem? LOL You need some help young lady. And to my knowledge in this country Freedom Of Speech(writing poetry) is not against the law. Although you stealing Reba McEntires song and trying to post it here as your own, is illegal. And where did you get the 3am thing, honey? I can assure you I am not thinking of you, at that time of the am. You are one strange bird. |
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