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The Rope
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:40:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am all out of hope
My last resort- the rope
The hoop- just big enough for my head,
Yet tight enough to make me dead
I grab the end that is just rope,
There’s too much to bare- I just can’t cope
I tie the straight end to a branch,
The rope is my last chance
I tie it really tight,
I want to end this fight
It cannot be loose at all,
I’m not allowed to fall
I stand on the stump,
I’m getting ready to jump
I loop the rope around my neck,
I think of my life and… what the heck?
I step off of the wood,
I did what I could
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Re: The Rope
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:20:25 AM AEST
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| sad...but well written. the rhyme flows well...i love rhyming poems...and i love this one! |
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Re: The Rope
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by rockergirl94 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:16:58 PM AEST
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Very descriptive...I can really see it in my mind as I read it.
Anyways I just hope you never did it, there's more to life than this. If you ever wanna talk just send me a message.
Julie |
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Re: The Rope
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:33:48 PM AEST
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oh shelly... this is a brilliant poem... i absolutely love it and can TOTALLY relate... especially due to recent events that include my dad....
but i cant lose you... die alone together right? ok well im not ready... i thought i was but im really not and neither are you!
...... jennie* luv n hugz from me 2 u |
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Re: The Rope
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:45:12 PM AEST
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*claps* well done Sprints...and good poem too; )
The rhyme scheme was pretty good, and the flow was relatively smooth...but the ending...is the icing on the cake! Nicely done!!
Scorp. |
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Re: The Rope
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by Bones on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:28:19 PM AEST
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Nice poem...strong message. But always remeber this...death is not always the answer...as long as you look deeper.
Peace,
Agent Bones |
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