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Older Guys
Contributed by
Tricky
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Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:29:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Why do older guys have such appeal
to younger girls who want to feel
the lust that they possess.
The illegal feeling tastes so good
it makes us wish we really could
go where laws won't let us.
I try so hard to catch his eye
when he asks my age I have to lie
to get alone without a fuss.
He takes me up the frat house stairs
and in his room the condom tears
for now, I share his lust.
Copyright ©
Tricky
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2005-07-24 22:29:38]
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Re: Older Guys
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:33:57 PM AEST
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nice poem... and yes... it's true. why do we girls have to fall for older guys? i mean, for now, i can fight it and like guys my age. i guess that's what we have to do. good write, though, keep it up!
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Re: Older Guys
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by Tricky on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:49:31 PM AEST
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| Hey, thanks. I love to hear comments on my poetry. you should read and comment the rest of my poems on here. Thanks again! |
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Re: Older Guys
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 06:06:36 PM AEST
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A very sophisticated peace of writting, 2 the point and no clutter, would make a lovely
rennisance painting, well done . . .
Ben |
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Re: Older Guys
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 07:26:08 PM AEST
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| Wait until he gets possesive and controlling.not so exciting then, trust me, Ros |
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