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The Morning After
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 05:51:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Wake up in your arms
the sun's cascading rays
Hit the snooze alarm
let's stay in bed all day
Kiss me on my forehead
I look up and greet your eyes
Expected at work, but let's stay home instead
made love all night, watched the sunrise
Tracing your body with my fingers
feelings of love flood my heart
Ecstasies sweet ache lingers
from you I shall never part
A thousand words spoken
neither one of us need speak
My heart you have awoken
thoughts of you make me weak
Melting in your gaze...
I kiss you with passionate need
Setting my body ablaze
when your mouth hungrily feeds
Embracing you tightly
legs wrapped around your waist
Tongue dancing lightly
there's no need for haste
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-07-24 17:51:50]
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Re: The Morning After
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:02:32 PM AEST
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That one sizzles Scorp! Very passionate with a lot of imagery. Too many of those kind of mornings after, and who would ever get to work. :)
Very romantic write, well done Scorp
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Re: The Morning After
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:22:44 PM AEST
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this is a very mellow and chilled poem
nice job! |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Lancaster on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:30:28 PM AEST
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damn scorp, hangin out with you, a man will never get to work, ....i like it alot
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Re: The Morning After
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by colinbaker62 on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:32:03 PM AEST
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A lovely poem, and you are a lucky devil making love 'ALL' night. As for me, in the words of the song "it takes me all night to do what I used to do all night"
Colin |
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Re: The Morning After
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by shelby on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:33:17 PM AEST
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steamy I love it and it sounds like a great idea another worded masterpiece
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Re: The Morning After
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by StoneAngel on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:51:43 PM AEST
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| very nicely done and paints a vivid picture of love and lust. I wish I was that women in the poem. |
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Re: The Morning After
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:24:20 PM AEST
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Hmmm, a night like that calls for a day at home. Resting up and practicing for a repeat the next night. Excellent, sensual without graphically throwing it in our face. Lovely, to say the least. Lucky woman,you.
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Re: The Morning After
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by CryingInVain on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:17:11 PM AEST
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| Very intriguing, I also loved the way the words flowed, soo sensual yet very tasteful.Great write. |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:58:16 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, very effective use of imagery.
I especially like this part..
Tracing your body with my fingers
feelings of love flood my heart
Ecstasies sweet ache lingers
from you I shall never part
Dang hit that snooze alarm again.. the boss can wait.
Very sensual write here.. ty for sharing.
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: The Morning After
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by CarolinaBlue on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 09:46:53 PM AEST
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Very classy Scorp. Sounds like you are "on" to something, hehe. Makes me want to call out of work tomorrow. A lovely write.
~Blue~ |
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Re: The Morning After
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by thepizzaguy on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:14:36 PM AEST
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| I love how you wrote this poem, its beautiful. And then in the end, its your excuse to stay home from work, perfect. |
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Re: The Morning After
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:05:35 PM AEST
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| Oh this is so romantic, sizzles too. I loved this part.....A thousand words spoken neither one of us need speak...beautiful. Great write. Peace, Laura |
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Re: The Morning After
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by seci on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:29:18 AM AEST
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| i love it, i love it, i love it. it makes me think of how love should truly be. how it should feel. like you are on cloud nine or something. everytime i read your poems, i feel chills because they are so real. i enjoy the way you write. i really love your point of view on love. i wish love can always be like that instead of painful all the time. keep writing, because you know seci will keep reading. |
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Re: The Morning After
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 06:49:20 AM AEST
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Wow loved the passion in this write. No wonder you wanted to phone in sick ha ha .
I would have needed a lie in not another session lol
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:33:04 PM AEST
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Well now, what a way to start the day....after that, yes bed sounds very tempting!!!
Great feeling in this, imagery and passion...yes definately passionate!
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Re: The Morning After
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 06:00:51 PM AEST
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Nice write scorp as always stylish yet very sincere . . .
((((scorp)))) Ben |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:19:07 AM AEST
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| Amazing. |
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Re: The Morning After
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 07:52:41 PM AEST
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A brillant, passionate and sensual write u have here dearest Scorp. Not that I expected anything less from u. It's really great how you've put this one together without been graphic. Well done my friend. Another 5 cascading stars for u.
Hugs,
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Re: The Morning After
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 12:02:18 PM AEST
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Whoa.. this was steamy!!! I loved this it was great.. They way it was written and the choice of words and rhyme scheme this poem was on FIRE!!! lol!!! this was a great poem
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Re: The Morning After
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 09:15:22 AM AEST
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Scorpadoodlishus!!!!
Holy wow. This is just a positively perfect sensual, passionate,
and beautiful write. (And wouldn't we all just love to do this? ) steamy
There is something within this that moves me. Not just the
words spoken, but more of the emotion and sentiment behind
the words. What is not said. A feeling ..
It is inside these writes that I feel most akin to you my dear
Scorpy. I have been intimate with these emotions, and
I'm sure, (at least hoping lol), I will be introduced again.
Exceptional!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Morning After
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 06:16:01 PM AEST
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beautifully passionate and oh so romantic,
penned to perfection once again, this is where
you belong, cuddled up in happiness, {so we
all have to turn our fans on lol} blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Morning After
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 08:05:52 PM AEST
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| I love that you refuse to be bound by self censorship. I love reading your love poems. they are real and sexy. they hold the passions that you experienced and in a way we get a peek into the romance and fire that you get to experience. God I miss that in my own life, my own passionate experiences left 2 years ago, never to be seen or heard from again. |
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