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I'M NOT HUNGRY.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 04:57:03 PM in AEST
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Earlier, I said I wasn’t hungry, when you offered to cook.
I was drowsy; you’d have seen if you’d looked…
Then, later, you present some thing high in carbs and fat,
I’M-ON-A-DIET!
No thanks… I don’t want that…
Waking to up, out of my sleep.
You’re there.
… I say I don’t wanna eat…
"Sue wanna know why the population’s obese?
No, block me out.
Be fat.
Be a freak".
… You say I’ve lost weight…
Yeah, I know.
But I’m STILL fat.
And IT still shows…
… So I’ve set myself a goal.
To eat less each day.
And it’s very affective.
To slowly lose weight.
I want to be thinner.
I like the ‘thin look’.
It makes me feel better.
So I eat raw fruit etc.
I take cold showers,
And exercise every day.
And my family say I’m slimmer,
And it feels good that way!
… So now they don’t like it.
Tough. It’s too late.
This is MY life.
And I'm not hungry, any way...!
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deathdrop
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2005-07-24 16:57:03]
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:47:10 PM AEST
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| PLEASE-COMMENT-ON-THIS!!!!! |
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by StoneAngel on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:13:47 PM AEST
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| u go deathdrop dont listen to what other people say. just be careful and stop when u feek u have lost enough. My family complains when i dont eat lunch or breakfast but i eat on my own time. |
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:18:02 PM AEST
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Well, I'm all for eating healthy and exercising and whatnot...as long as it's done for the right reasons, and in a safe manner...Subject aside, you expressed yourself well in this write, and kept a steady flow...the style, though not traditional, worked quite well for this piece too...An emotive write.
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:35:01 PM AEST
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Well, I think people should eat when they are hungry and only then. Eating because it is scheduled or you are bored is not healthy. I agree that family dinner times are important but it doesn't have to be heavy meals. Fruit, grains, and some type of protein will keep you healthy and happy. Just don't go the anorexic bit because it is physically and emotionally destructive to you. I prefer the healthy glowing look to the thin anorexic look or the overfed cow look.
Good write,
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 09:29:45 PM AEST
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Its nice to be conscience of your health.. fewer people are these days..
If you truly want to stay slim, and still remain healthy, find out good nutritional facts..
We all have a certain image of how we want to look to ourselves, and also others.. just do not go overboard.. you could lose your muscle mass, hair, skin color, mental ability etc. etc. etc.
There are a variety of choices for healthy foods that will provide you with lots of vitamins, minerals, etc.
Muscles need food. Don't forget them..
Fad dieting does not work..
Here is a cool site.. nice reading and such..
The natural body builders way..
http://www.fatlosstips.com/
Find the times when you are truly hungry, and then you can prepare your meals around those times..
Drink water first, if you still feel hungry, then eat by all means.. the body needs food in order to survive..
Nice write, very educational insight for keeping from becoming overweight.. makes one think ..
Raquel Leah (Poetress
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by seci on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:45:33 AM AEST
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somehting tells me you are the one of the most beautiful people in the world but you don't realize it. don't listen what others say about you. it hurts but all you can do is learn and take it and be strong.
1luv
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by seci on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:45:53 AM AEST
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something tells me you are the one of the most beautiful people in the world but you don't realize it. don't listen what others say about you. it hurts but all you can do is learn and take it and be strong.
1luv
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by ipanema_gal on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:04:17 AM AEST
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| im glad that your trying to keep healthy and that its going good for you but every person is beautiful you dont need a slimmer waist to show that |
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 05:01:47 PM AEST
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| I agree with what the others said. Just work on how you feel about yourself and you're body will follow. |
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by ladymaki on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:02:58 AM AEST
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Just a question..
how much do you actually way? It really seems like your completely obsessing over being skinny..when you say you like 'the thin look', it makes you seem really shallow.. |
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Re: I'M NOT HUNGRY.
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by tearstained_soul on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 10:16:11 PM AEST
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DEATHDROP-
how's going? thanx 4 commenting on my poem! this is another EXELLENT poem by you, it's nice to know your not anerexic but PRETTY PLEASE keep control so you don't end up anerexic in the end!~ you rock babe and so does your poetry!
~britt~ |
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