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An ode to my fiancee

Contributed by girish on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:28:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My eye-sight had lost its essence and the fingers got worn
I began to make count of the days since I was left forlorn
O thou with gleaming dresses worn, but for that one day
Henceforth these dresses remain, their beauty worn away

Pursuing business, left on sole company and yet I sustain
For a long time to see her and her face once again
She comes again, who left my side, to taste love`s joy
Thoughts give rapture to hearts and that my mind employ

O let me see my fiancée again, and sate my longing eyes
And that instant from my wasted frame all paleness flies
O let my fiancee after some time, come to me once again
I will drink that nectar, and the wasting grief shall refrain

Shall I draw back or yield myself or shall both mingled be
When she returns, my fiancee dear as these eyes to me
O would my queen would overcome and divide the spoil
At home, for this the banquet spread should crown the toil

One day will seem like seven, to those who watch and yearn
For that glad day when my queen, from her business return
With her return, the meeting hour, wishes and greets worth
If the heart-broken lie, with all her life poured forth?

Copyright Â© girish ... [ 2005-07-24 03:28:53]
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Re: An ode to my fiancee (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 04:00:34 PM AEST
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Ya know what they say: absence sharpens love; presence strengthens it. So it may be strong and sharp at the same time, but sometimes, with long absences, we'd be ok if it were a little dull lol... but anyway, great write, I really liked it

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