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My Fear
Contributed by
findingmyself107
on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:27:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lay awake the thoughts filling every piece of my mind
I try to shut them out but without success
the tears are coming
I can feel them burning behind my eyes threatening to fall
to fall and make my pain known
but there’s no one here to see it
no one that realizes my fear.
Waiting for them to open their eyes and see what I feel
see my fears
the care they say they posses for me
am I blind to it or is it really not there?
Why are they missing it?
are they see what they wan?
They blame me, but they’re wrong
its my fear.
The breathe is being sucked from me
as I go round and round
over and over
but nobody sees it
nobody reaches to stop it all
it just comes crashing down
here I am left picking up the pieces alone
not knowing how to piece it all back together
being more confused by my fear
lost in the ruble but to afraid to cry out for help.
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2005-07-24 03:27:14]
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Re: My Fear
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:10:39 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this, for the fact i can really relate to what u feel...to feel that no body really cares.. but really they do, but its something i know that everyone has experienced..and i hope things have gotten better for you |
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Re: My Fear
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by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:29:45 PM AEST
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| well if this poem didnt vent some feelings, i dont know how that woulda happened. so i hope it did, cuz this is packed full of emotion. i can relate to this. the poem gets a good point across. good job. thanks for sharing. |
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