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please patrick

Contributed by Eloise on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

i try to act like it doesnt hurt
like it doesnt really bother me
you dont think you can love someone youve never met
but i love you
ive only seen you in photos
red hair and bright blue eyes...
i tell you good luck with the girl you like
inside im crying
my heart is screaming no...i hope she doesnt like you!
my mind is whispering love me, i love you
but my lips are saying go for it patrick
what if theres a war tomorrow
will you go away?
i dont want you to die patrick
without you i dont know what i would do...
i would cry
i would fall to my knees
ive missed you so much patrick
i wish you missed me too.
where are you?
why arent you here...
i wrote you a letter
it said that i loved you...
that i wanted you so much...
so i screwed it up...
and started again...
it says...
hello patrick...
good luck with jessica
make sure you ring her
from me
its full of deceit and lies...
i wish i didnt have to lie to you...
i wish i could tell you how much you mean to me
and how much it means to me to hear you say
that you are my friend
should i smile because you are my friend?
or should i cry because that all youll ever be?
once again my lips form the words...
good luck patrick
inside my heart is crying out...
please love me back patrick
please dont ask her out
please dont go to war
i love you patrick

Copyright © Eloise ... [ 2003-01-11 19:40:00]
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Re: please patrick (User Rating: 1 )
by kels497 on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:15:12 PM AEST
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this is so sad. i was in a situation like this before, and i understand all too well. my heart goes out to you, and good luck!

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