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A Haiku
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:22:57 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Pale gray skies abound
hued like an angel's vast wings,
overshadowing.
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Man_On_High
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2005-07-23 23:22:57]
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Re: A Haiku
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by thepizzaguy on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:30:07 PM AEST
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| One word, last line, filling all syllabals (misspelled), cool. |
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Re: A Haiku
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:45:16 PM AEST
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| i like it...gr8 job, Keep it up! |
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Re: A Haiku
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:25:18 AM AEST
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I love your haiku..
its amazing how a few words.. syllables can tell such a complete story.. a whole mouthful said, in so few word.. its just amazing..
I wrote mine yesterday.. and forgot I did.. lol.. I saw yours and said oh yea.. let me post mine too..
Its my first one.. hope it is correct..
All I can remember about haiku's in college was.. its 5-7-5 syllables.. I think I want to go research more on this delectable type of poetry.
Yours is so beautiful.. ty for posting it..
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: A Haiku
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by wizard on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:13:23 AM AEST
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havent seen many haikus by you lately (i remeber some from the past..the puddle book maybe?..lol)
but this was simply fantastic...i agree that the use of one word for the last line was very befitting for this particular write..great job bro.
wiz |
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Re: A Haiku
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 04:06:52 AM AEST
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Even with a few words you are mesmerizing Billy!!!
Terrific, terrific
*applause* |
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Re: A Haiku
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:29:37 AM AEST
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| I am a fan of haiku. Written a few myself. This one was beautiful. Job well done. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: A Haiku
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:32:48 PM AEST
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love the colors y do they remind of my new england? lol, nice write bill . . .
Ben |
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Re: A Haiku
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:38:14 PM AEST
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This is a beautifu Haiku. They are one of my favorite poetic styles because of the form and being about nature. You have done a magnificent job here.
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Re: A Haiku
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:28:32 AM AEST
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| wonderful haiku billy. i would show you some of mine, but i rather value my pride =] |
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Re: A Haiku
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by brew on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:43:10 PM AEST
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Missed this one the other day............such elegant words, the free flow in this haiku...........simple beautiful. Especially the angels, wings.
Brew~ |
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