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Defect in my Heart
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:01:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Emotions built up
within scarlet entrails
there are gashes
sleepless night
mankind cruel
fates unknown
broken up cries
tend to slip
intertwined swirl
fears of color
dismay in happiness
peaks up warmth
hate to love
abide by these
tainted swarms
these twisted thoughts
of one man alone
darkness drawing
sun has faded
mist overtakes
one thought
scream
laugh
whisper
Copyright ©
Vampire_Slander
... [
2005-07-23 21:01:02]
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Re: Defect in my Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:14:29 PM AEST
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Spell check is invaluable.
It is after all the WRITTEN word-
that aside.. I enjoyed this.
could be listed as 'dark poetry' as well..
but the category you chose suffices just the same.
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Re: Defect in my Heart
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:14:22 AM AEST
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| I like this twisted flow |
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