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My Love
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:37:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I watch you as you sleep, so calm
Snuggled there so safe and warm
Lying by my side so close
Vision of such sweet repose
In a dream your murmuring
As you do, your arm you fling
over me and hold me tight
As if you hope I won't take flight
Never will I leave your side
Deep as the ocean and as wide
Is this love I have for you
I will stay for ever true
You fill me with a passion deep
Even when you're fast asleep
When my darling you awake
We will such sweet music make
Love together, strong and true
Unites for ever, me and you
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-07-23 15:37:48]
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Re: My Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem indeed of a flourishing love
seet and delicately stated . . .
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Re: My Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:49:00 PM AEST
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i mispelled sweet, but then this rates 2 coments sweet, i read it again, so simple
and yet ripples throuh the heart as the ripples
in a pound when touch by gentle persuasion . . .
Ben |
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Re: My Love
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by Lancaster on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 07:45:19 PM AEST
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This was poem filled with love and hope.
Love together, strong and true
Unites for ever, me and you"
very well said
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Re: My Love
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:41 PM AEST
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This write shows deep loyalty and faith in your love. That is a rare commodity. Cherish it with all your heart. good work.
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Re: My Love
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:50:59 PM AEST
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An honest heartfelt write..
Great job Ros
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Re: My Love
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by syenn0512 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:54:04 PM AEST
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| nice one ;) |
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Re: My Love
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by wizard on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:14:55 AM AEST
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great write ros, i miss the feelings described here...i hope you never have to miss them!
wiz |
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Re: My Love
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by seci on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:01:32 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. i wish and hope that someday i can find a love like that so i can write and feel the same exact way. |
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Re: My Love
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by seci on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:02:09 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. i wish and hope that someday i can find a love like that so i can write and feel the same exact way. |
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Re: My Love
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by seci on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:02:09 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. i wish and hope that someday i can find a love like that so i can write and feel the same exact way. |
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