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Why Love?
Contributed by
justintears
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Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:01:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In every tear I've tasted
In every breathe I've drawn
In all the years I've wasted
In wait for your love to dawn
Tell me why I bothered
Tell me why I tried
Tell me all I mean to you
Tell me your just a lie
Why don't you feel any love for me?
Why don't you try to see?
Why don't you try explaining
Why your life is killing me...
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justintears
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2005-07-23 09:01:46]
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Re: Why Love?
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:06:52 AM AEST
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| good write keep writing and sharing |
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Re: Why Love?
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by Randyjohnson on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:33:19 AM AEST
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| well written. |
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Re: Why Love?
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by CryingInVain on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 07:45:48 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of things I used to say to my x, Short but very heart felt.I loved it. |
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Re: Why Love?
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by bluesbaby811 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:18:32 PM AEST
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| really good i really like it |
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Re: Why Love?
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:50:31 AM AEST
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A very sad yet truthful poem. I know what you truely mean when you said "Why Love?"
amazing poem 5/5
Jane~ |
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