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Summer; the most beautiful season
Contributed by
bob18dylan
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:37:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your amber eyes
shine like the sunset skies
of summer; the most beautiful season
Your lips nectar sweet
speak words soft as the breeze
of summer; the most beautiful season
Your bronze locks of hair
delicates as the wild flowers
of summer; the most beautiful season
My heart blooms when I'm amidst Summer;
the most beautiful season
Copyright ©
bob18dylan
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2005-07-22 23:37:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by MomentInTime on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 02:42:33 AM AEST (User
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I like this one...
* is actually envious for not being able to write love poems *
for the imagery. Well done.
Jordan :o) |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:15 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
*%^Chrissy^%* |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:22 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
*%^Chrissy^%* |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:30 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
*%^Chrissy^%* |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:37 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
*%^Chrissy^%* |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:46 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
Chrissy |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:47 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
Chrissy |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:56 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
Chrissy |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:42:57 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem !!!! keep writing i can tell yew have great emotions for this girl the best of luck to ya
Chrissy |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 02:59:12 PM AEST (User
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This is so very lovely. It showcases your poetic talent. I would never have thought of that wonderful title. Great work.
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 06:11:22 AM AEST (User
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A lovely compliment to the girl in question, and not a bad write. I too, wrote a poem about a girlfriend based on her surname, called the coming of Winter, but the moderators pulled it off. I'll leave it at that....
Spike |
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Re: Summer; the most beautiful season
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:06:14 AM AEST (User
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This was such a beautiful tender poem. You have expressed your self so well with this.
Thanks for sharing.
Jane~ |
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