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Just Another One
Contributed by
forgottensorrow
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You're just another one
just another one
just another one in my life
I promise myself that I won't go head-over-heels for you
I promise myself
I won't hurt you
But you don't
Hear these thoughts in my head
And I'm sure glad they can't be read
Why are your eyes so perfect?
Why's your smile so sweet?
Why am I falling for you so quickly?
Just tell me what you think
Take my hand
We'll live while we can
We will cry tomorrow
I know you might not believe me when I say
Things will turn out this way
But let's go on living like today will never end
Watch tomorrow we'll only be friends (just friends)
(I'm still working on verse 2)
You took my hand
We lived while we could
Now we're crying today (at least I am)
I'm sorry that
Things turned out this way
At least today, in the end
We're still friends
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forgottensorrow
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2005-07-22 23:24:43]
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Re: Just Another One
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:21:49 AM AEST
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| I had deffenetly had those feelings before and man they sucked bad... I hated them... All i can say is im sry and good luck... |
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Re: Just Another One
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:10:28 AM AEST
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Nice write good beginning I will look forward to seeing the other verses.
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