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Dark Cloud
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:27:29 PM in AEST
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There is a dark cloud,
One that is grey and loud
This dark cloud follows me,
It never lets me be
All it does is rain
And brings me my pain
Doesn’t let the sun show,
The blue sky – I don’t know
The dark cloud washed it all away,
Left me with nothing to say
Lets me fall down,
Lets me wear a frown
This dark cloud is behind,
Seeping deep into my mind
This dark cloud is ahead,
Always haunts me in bed
This dark cloud at both sides,
Haunting me when our friend died
I can’t escape its power,
It is high over, like a tower
I can’t run from the dark cloud
It always throws me to the ground
It always catches me
It just will not leave me be
This is what I follow
While I grow hollow
It leads, it follows, it is beside,
This cloud is destroying my mind
My dark cloud,
Grey and loud
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by forgottensorrow on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:28:36 PM AEST
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I think that we all have our own dark clouds that follow us.
Good write
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:26:49 AM AEST
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"This is what I follow
While I grow hollow
It leads, it follows, it is beside,
This cloud is destroying my mind"-Gasp
Wow incredible this is a powerful wright... You made me feel how you felt... Wow Great Job |
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 07:26:15 AM AEST
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| Whenever I feel a dark cloud coming over me I think of it as a cloak wrapping itself around me, protecting me until I can face the world again.I feel warm and comforted and the cloak rolls away to reveal a sunnier day, Ros |
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:43:03 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by Asthenia on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:49:25 PM AEST
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| if everyday were sunny we wouldn't know the joy of a sunny day...when a dark cloud is shielding your eyes from the light, it hurts...but when it leaves, you find more joy in the sunny days that follow...be strong until sunnier days show up again |
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:57:27 PM AEST
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Great metaphor..Dark Cloud-
and a great write as well..
B |
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