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coming to get me
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:23:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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coming to get me
something is wrong
the ground is shaking
making me feel raw
eyes all around
watching from every tree
wating for me to make my flee
all alone in the dark
all of sudden came a bark
scared me to death tracking me down
hearing the hollow barking sound
i ran and ran as it followed behind
finally making it home so i can hide
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Re: coming to get me
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:28:40 PM AEST
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| i like this...when my mom makes me take the trash out in the dark i sometimes my dog will bark and i get so scared that i run like crazy back to my house! well...keep writing! you're good at it! |
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Re: coming to get me
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:32:06 PM AEST
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this was great! i enjoyed reading this one so much. i liked the words you chose to use and you used them well. and sometimes facing your fear is the best, unless of course, it can hurt you a lot to face your fear. well written, keep up the good work!
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Re: coming to get me
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:17:34 AM AEST
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| Ill agree with you on this one... When my mom askes me to do something and its in the dark anything freaks me out... |
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Re: coming to get me
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by Randyjohnson on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:25:30 AM AEST
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| Good poem. |
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Re: coming to get me
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by trini on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:27:44 PM AEST
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very nice write. the dark creeps me out too.
-trini |
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Re: coming to get me
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by aplsdka on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:37:52 PM AEST
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| wow, i really like this poem. Im terrified of the dark, outside, and i thought you captured the thoughts and feelings really well. this is an awesome poem |
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