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Revenge
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:10:43 PM in AEST
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She’ll gradually sweep upon you
Sweet, sweet revenge that is
She’ll wait until you’re the most vulnerable
Then, she’ll strike
You shouldn’t have betrayed me
Or hurt me like this
But it’s too late now
For she is coming for you
For I have sent her to destroy you
And everything you love in life
She will make sure you have nothing left
Not even the slightest thing
Then, after you figure out the mistake you’ve made
She’ll come after you
And you can’t hide from her
You can only run
Although she’ll catch up with you in no time
So run I say. RUN!
It’s more exciting that way
Don’t you think?
I don’t know for sure how she’ll destroy you
But I assure you, it won’t be quick
For I want you to suffer
Like I suffered…only worse
So run all you want
She will catch up to you!
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Re: Revenge
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:36:39 PM AEST
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lol. well written write! and i feel bad who has sweet revenge coming after them. i'd like to take revenge on all who've hurt me, but that be many... so yeah... lol. i liked how you put this write together, it was well written, keep up the good work!
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Re: Revenge
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:35:29 AM AEST
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| thank you! i feel so special...and yes....many have hurt me too...i can't take revenge on them all...but i can try! |
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Re: Revenge
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by MomentInTime on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:05:11 AM AEST
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MG... this is one of your best writes...
I liked the way you created the imagery of being chased... I had to stop myself from running lol
Jordan :o) |
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Re: Revenge
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by CryingInVain on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 07:49:49 PM AEST
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| This is the first dark poem I have read on here and it was spectactular, ahh sweet revenge, how lovely she is. |
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Re: Revenge
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:37:37 PM AEST
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| thank you! im glad i was the first dark poem you read! |
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Re: Revenge
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by Xsitm on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:40:25 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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