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Unrequited Love
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:07:34 PM in AEST
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This unrequited love is all I’ve got
Nothing more and not a lot
Why does it have to be this way?
I’ve told you everything that I had to say
But you rejected me and shunned me out
But I still love you and this is without a doubt
So where do I go from here?
I can’t go far because I still want you near
After a while everything went back to normal, in your eyes, at least
But don’t you understand that my love for you will never cease?
I guess I wasn’t worthy of your love
Because those little 3 words, you never spoke of
I just want you to feel the same way!
‘Cause no matter what, I love you more and more each day
This is like a curse that has been cast upon me
For I am bound to you and I will never be set free
And I know my feelings will never be returned back
And a broken heart is definitely something I do not lack
For you ripped my heart out and threw it away
So I ask you, what else could you possibly say?
You probably could say more about how much of a fool I am
For I have confessed my love and all you said was “I don’t give a damn!”
Yes, it still hurts but somehow I still manage to get by
I guess I just kept wishing that you were telling a lie
This unrequited love is all I’ve got
Nothing more and not a lot
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misunderstood_gurl
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2005-07-22 22:07:34]
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:16:59 PM AEST
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very well written. you expressed yourself. and i hate that you have to put up with the pain, too. i know how you feel, but i've basically have grown numb to the hurt. and i hope that you can move past this. that you can be free. and find someone else who loves you back. i wish you lots of luck!
~sprints
p.s. great write! keep up the good work! |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Tricky on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:03:03 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how that feels. I'm actually going through the same thing right now. It's really great and very powerful. |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:40:32 AM AEST
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| thank you all again! this is one of my fav poems i have written... |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:35:34 AM AEST
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| Its your favorite? Well i can tell you put a lot of thought into this one... It defenitly made me feel how you felt |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 02:40:24 AM AEST
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You did a good job expressing yourself with this write...Your emotions were fully felt, and it certainly is a crummy feeling! You kept a good rhyme scheme, and a fairly even flow, and I like how you opened and closed with the same two lines...Nicely done.
Welcome to YPDC!
Scorp. |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:20:31 AM AEST
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nice poem and the heart melt
keep sharing ur love
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 07:14:55 PM AEST
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| Yea...it is my favorite. i got the idea of it when i read this fanfic and i thought to myself...this sounds like me and the name of it was unrequited love...and after that i just spilled my heart out onto the paper! Thankies for commenting! i love to read them... |
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