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Frantic Pace
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:59:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Morning is where you move..
The newborn rising sun
stroking languid waves..
as they wash up
on sugar ivory sand.
Gulls in a lazy ballet
acrobatic in salt air..
no longer wailing with need
as if they too were replete
with promise..
lyrical on the wind.
Horizons half hid in mist
dance in and out
soft against the charred amber
morning sky.. and the Bay
smoke upon burnt glass.
I grope for words
to capture this morning
as a black starling in song
from a nearby dune reminds me
of my puny arrogance..
with no note of mockery in it's voice
knowing the true artist between us.
With no need for words
complimenting my world..
you smile at my frantic pace
to express the inexpressible-
harboring my small despairs
keeping me new for wonder..
cradling my song.
The morning is where you move
and love-lucid.. my senses follow.
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by nanb294eva on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:19:19 PM AEST
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all your poems are beutiful they really do belong in a book.
your face belongs in my minds eye,
for which it is.
my heart is there to follow my senses of true love
i love you billy
love nancy |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:24:49 PM AEST
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This poem left me speechless, it is nothing less than amazing!!!! It does belong in a book, and it is one of the best poems I have read on this site.
Leia36 |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:43:40 PM AEST
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Only a truly talented and gifted writer as yourself could've written something so unique and superb as this. A brillant masterpiece written to perfection.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:51:47 PM AEST
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| MOH.wow. this one is just fabulous, I love morning poems….and this one takes a few interesting twists and turns…awesome job. |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:09:03 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write! This is so lovely, I can't even pick a favourite line or stanza...Very well done Billy....wow.
Scorp. |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:03:23 AM AEST
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Lovely work. Yours is always a pleasure to read.
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:17:43 PM AEST
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ahh the bay smoke love that phrase wonder why lol, beautifuly mystic poetry nicely done bill . . .
Ben |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by wizard on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:19:02 AM AEST
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truly an amazing write..
"Horizons half hid in mist
dance in and out
soft against the charred amber
morning sky.. and the Bay
smoke upon burnt glass"
great stanza..loved it bro.
wiz |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 04:00:57 AM AEST
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Love-filled poems that touch one's heart.
So beautifully written, amazing imagery and the poem read so well.
"With no need for words
complimenting my world..
you smile at my frantic pace
to express the inexpressible-
harboring my small despairs
keeping me new for wonder.."
those words are just so moving......
*sighs in amazement*
This piece was a wonder and you have a god-given talent.
Your words do mean so much |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by harlot20 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:53:46 PM AEST
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| mmmm i could reallly escape into that poem. and i did :D it was so beautiful and so serene. i miss going to the beach. |
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Re: Frantic Pace
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 08:45:29 PM AEST
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Sweetheart, rare is he that can move an unbeating
heart and still, a beating one.. You plant words that
cultivate a new richness each and every time I visit.
The descriptions and images in this are enough to
captivate the most stoic of hearts, my dear poet. And
that this came from you, moves this heart in a way I
can’t set down into words. I can feel this ..as if I were
there on the sand myself ..
Excruciatingly beautiful ~
~Breezy
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