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Only One Shall Stand...
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 05:01:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Kiss from an angle
blood on a spear
its not the light that thou shall fear
lost of hope and tainted dreams
beings supressed by the inside screams
When Terror falls all shall stop
frozen in fear they shall be marked
those who run wont get away
once terror stikes its time to pay
poison willows in a garden of black
absorbing the souls of those who pass
feel my taint and what it brings
for I am Terror, fear my wrath
as light hides away the black will consume
and you will become Terror as I have
childen of Darkness which we will be
the world will be in chaos
forever trapped in my world of locked doors
where the mind will only play tricks
The heart will be battared and tore
and all you love will make you sick
Look what you have become
I fed off your life and now you're nothing
useless, mindless, utter fools you be
I used you, you're nothing to me
you are my terror and I am yours
but I am your god you feed me
I own you here in this place of mind
you'll be scared for life, and will remember
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Re: Only One Shall Stand...
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:50:52 AM AEST
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| great write need more improvement |
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Re: Only One Shall Stand...
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by Vampire_Slander on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:46:41 PM AEST
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| I'm working on it.. that was a first attempt at that particular poem |
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Re: Only One Shall Stand...
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:49:09 PM AEST
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this was a good write. it could use a little improvement here and there, but it was really good in places. it is a dark piece and i enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work!
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Re: Only One Shall Stand...
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by BEE on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:32:16 AM AEST
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VERY NICE LOVED HOW IT WENT
PS GET AT SOME OF MINE
BEE |
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