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OVERLOAD!
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 05:00:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Screaming always Screaming
but only inside my head
loosing composure
I've lost my self
Heart beat racing
sweat on my palms
A shout of anger
my stream of tears
Too many thoughts
confusion so great
A overwhelming pain
my muffled sobs
always running
somethings not right
these frightning thoughts
slowly take me
This fester within
my heart aches
too much pressure
hesitant thinking
drawing nearer
these thoughts
Copyright ©
Vampire_Slander
... [
2005-07-22 17:00:02]
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Re: OVERLOAD!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 06:18:17 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. Very dark and easy for me to relate to and I'm sure others as well.
Take Care
Stellar |
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Re: OVERLOAD!
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 07:21:11 AM AEST
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| An anguished write.Blow that fuse,take a deep breathe,sit down and listen.Imagine a river flowing by.Listen to it's gently trickling.Hear birds singing, feel the sun on your face and feel calm creep over you.Good Luck, Ros |
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Re: OVERLOAD!
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by Vampire_Slander on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:28:31 PM AEST
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| Thank you both for the kind words. |
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