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dirty,dirty,little
Contributed by
tommylover
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 04:23:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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dirty dirty little whore
take just a second
to hear what i say
we all know the truth
and we're sick of your lies
we want you gone
and out of our lives
soon you will see
when its to late
what you had
wasn't that bad
you say your in love
all you wrote was hate
your heart told you lies
what more can i say
your a dirty whore
and have a nice day
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tommylover
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2005-07-22 16:23:14]
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Re: dirty,dirty,little
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:04:37 PM AEST
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wow... this is... powerful. yes, powerful. you really expressed yourself here, but you expressed yourself well. and there was a lot of anger. i don't know what else to say- i'm blown away. good write, keep it up.
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Re: dirty,dirty,little
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by Trisha on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:14:22 PM AEST
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| I lIke This |
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Re: dirty,dirty,little
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:03:25 AM AEST
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| Wow, I am impressed. For your first write here and your first write in a long time, you've done very well. Great flow to your poem.The last line was such a slap in the face after reading the poem (loved that). Such a truthful write as well, seems she just might be done with her lies on this site. Haven't seen her post here since the plagiarism episode. Hopefully Pete will wise up before it's too late. Much peace. Can't wait to see your next write. Laura |
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Re: dirty,dirty,little
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by veenu on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:00:37 AM AEST
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| nice poem |
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