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Boat Of Hope
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:32:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I travelled down life's lonely road
Carrying my heavy load
Dragging feet with deep despair
Lots of worries, many cares
Moved so slowly, heavy heart
Had no will to make new start
Thoughts of misery and pain
Slowly driving me insane
A bridge I found across this road
Under this bridge a river flowed
And on this river was a boat
Words were written,Boat Of Hope
I climbed inside and sailed away
Waves of calm, a peaceful day
Spray of life surrounded me
Setting heart and spirit free
Floating on a sea of calm
Safe and warm and free from harm
I'd been rescued from my plight
Out of darkness, into light
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-07-22 13:32:47]
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Re: Boat Of Hope
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by bernard on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:41:53 PM AEST
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| Wonderful a poem of hope with an exquisit sense of rhyming 5/5 from bernard |
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Re: Boat Of Hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:51:11 PM AEST
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I was carried away in the words and message and wonderful flow of rythym of this. I enjoyed it immensely. Beautifully penned.
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Re: Boat Of Hope
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by Fwog on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:48:02 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful poem, truly inspirational. I love the ebb and flow of emotion from dark despair to sunshine.
Excellent write.
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Re: Boat Of Hope
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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An excellent post on hope..
and I love the metaphor of the boat
very refreshing Ros..a great write indeed-
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Re: Boat Of Hope
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:25:01 PM AEST
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Such an aray of emotions so lovingly written
i enjoyed reading your work . . .
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Re: Boat Of Hope
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:18:13 PM AEST
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Well done!! Very inspirational...
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