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a life that went wrong
Contributed by
bigj
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:35:59 AM in AEST
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Why should I live, I don’t even care,
No one helps, no one is ever there.
Im at the point were I wish I would die,
Why be depressed, that’s all that comes with life.
Justin ray ford, that is my name,
A heart and soul filled with uncontrollable pain.
This tear of hate falls down my face,
Because My entire life I have felt like a disgrace.
That is the way I have been treated, so its how I feel,
It’s a permanent feeling, my fate has already been sealed.
Full of pain, because no one ever listens,
Every ones life around me has been blissend.
Where is my happiness, where is my joy,
They have tossed my heart around as if it was a useless toy.
When will it be over, when will it stop?
My mentality is at a all time low, it has dramatically dropped.
I want this pain to go away now,
Im pleading for help, I have begun to shout.
This is a life that went wrong,
A life that has lasted way too long.
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bigj
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2005-07-22 11:35:59]
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Re: a life that went wrong
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:17:09 PM AEST
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You really poured you heart out here my friend. Sometimes it's hard to keep fighting on, but you are tougher than they are and can't be brow beaten into submission.
Keep strong
Very well done
Larry
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Re: a life that went wrong
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:49:29 PM AEST
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| I really like ur poem and i used to feel like that but when u get something posotive in your life it all seems better and it iseems like u shud go on! If u wana tlk i am here 4 u! |
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