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Give It Time
Contributed by
LabWolf
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 07:46:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In my mind there's embers burning.
In my heart love is churning.
In my soul somethings' died.
Couldn't save it though I tried.
In the night I hide in shadow.
Too weak for my past bravado.
In the morning I will hide -
from the love to which I've lied.
On the scene a friend appears;
Claiming truth hides in mirrors.
I denounce you and your words!
I'll deny all that I've heard.
In my chest a crack is forming;
The demons of the past come storming...
throught the barrier of lies,
force me to look into my eyes.
Drowning now in my sin.
Think I'll let the darkness win.
No more peace, no more pain.
Become an animal again.
Rage my way through it all,
answering the pasts shrill call.
My friends now are little lines,
who'll kill me slowly - give them time.
Yeah, to myself I've given in.
Let my tangled emotions win.
Now they will kill me with their lines...
Yeah, just give it a little time.
I've still got
a little time...
© Barry Veinotte
Maniacal Writings - by Barry Veinotte Get The Book!
Copyright ©
LabWolf
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2005-07-22 07:46:14]
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Re: Give It Time
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:43:30 PM AEST
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wow, great write! i loved this. you used the perfect words and put it all together well. i really enjoyed reading this one, keep up the great work!!
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Re: Give It Time
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:39:32 PM AEST
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| Shocking!!! This is really good this is one of my favorite ones. |
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Re: Give It Time
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 09:53:48 AM AEST
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I enjoy reading your work. I think it is brillant. I love how the ryhmes are so put together it flows so beautifully. Great poem. loved it
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