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Waiting for Nothing
Contributed by
englishprincej
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 06:34:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Anxiously I wait
Shifting my weight from foot to foot
Palms sweaty
Mind racing, thoughts, feelings, ideas
Sleep, yeah, I remember the concept, but I can't
I'm waiting
For too long we've been apart
For too long I've been incomplete
For too long I've waited to kiss her, to hold her
To look at her
To be with her
I'm waiting
Each passing moment brings her closer
Each passing moment increases my nerves
She's not coming
At least for now, may as well be for ever
I fall.......hard
From the peaks of happiness to the depths of despair
Will we ever be together ?
Will I ever be complete ?
It hurts so much
Waiting for every birthday and Christmas to come at once
Then nothing, just a black hole
A long dark never ending hole.
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2005-07-22 06:34:43]
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Re: Waiting for Nothing
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:54:50 AM AEST
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Hey
great poem...I really enjoy the part whereby you so vividly describe the hopes and then the crestfallen dreams...
good luck
-glass
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Re: Waiting for Nothing
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by brew on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:12:09 PM AEST
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Absoulutly breath taking, yet the saddest write, i have EVER read.......................too much, and not enough. Cant, and wont have the words to describe, what just was felt in the heart.............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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