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I hope your happy
Contributed by
Bleeding_Corset
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 04:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Crisper than a blade
Sharp like a knife
Those words cut so deep
within my soul
my mind
tearing everything apart
my morals
my values
my world
are you happy now?
is this what you wanted?
cause this what everything has led to
I hope you see now
I hope your happy
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Re: I hope your happy
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by rockergirl94 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:28:28 PM AEST
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Short and sweet.
I love you're first three lines. Great similes.
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Re: I hope your happy
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 03:59:19 PM AEST
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Words can do so much... let them be your strength, your way of finding peace. You can write, and that is one way of hiding from the world when you need to.
Take care.
David |
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