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Captain’s Dilemma
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 04:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I locked away all those things,
That reminded me that love has wings
For when I fall its hard and fast
- And romance never lasts.
So I put aside and sealed with locks,
My heart within its memory box
Then dug a hole deep, deep within
- And buried all my sin.
To dull the pains I can’t abide,
My only choice was seal and hide
But then came time to let them free
- And now I’ve lost the key.
If by chance you know a trick,
To help a heart become lovesick
Then work your magic hard and fast
- Because romance never lasts.
Copyright ©
spike
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2005-07-22 04:11:53]
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Re: Captain’s Dilemma
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by LevyMetal on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:15:28 AM AEST
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beautiful write!!!
Very intriguing and kept my attention. Gorgeous flow to it. Simply wonderful!! |
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Re: Captain’s Dilemma
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:51:27 PM AEST
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I love the unique honesty of this. I certainly wish I could help, but I am locked behind a tall wall I built when my last love died and I closed myself in and cannot get out.
We who struggle for love so hard seem to be the ones that never get it right. Shame.
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Re: Captain’s Dilemma
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 06:38:33 AM AEST
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Well written poem! Awesome job. How true, though. Too often you throw things away, not knowing someday soon you'll be needing it.
Take care.
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Re: Captain’s Dilemma
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:57:36 AM AEST
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It sometimes lasts. It did for me. Good poem though.
P.S. If you choose to read a poem or two of mine, I'd like for you to read: Sherry my Love, With good purpose, and The Consolation of Israel. God bless. |
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