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What went around is coming back around

Contributed by Karma on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

On the first day of my birth on this man made Hell on Earth
I saw it's worth in flames, so many names that go to the list
Who all deserve to live in the midst Hell and burn to the bone
Alone for all the sins the have etched in stone on they're soul

John

My first victim aproches talkin on his cell
The money monger mother son of a should burn in hell
Stealing from the poor and weak to feed his greed
His breed needs termination, an imitation of His creation
I didn't hesitate, his death couldn't wait I ran up and grabbed him by his silk tie
He had to die, I wrapped it around his neck till he lost his air supply

Robin

There she stood at the end of the street
Selling her body like a piece of meat
God didn't create her to mate cash
The piece of trash wants to get paid to get laid
Made her soul so soaked in karma that she bleeds sin
I took John's knife and broke her skin

Corey

I heard someone yelling, telling their son he won a swelling
Another bad dad mad at his son for something stupid he did
Drunk punk beats on his wife and kid, another failed soul
And now his Kamra is going to make him burn like coal
I ran up and shut his mouth quick as face met brick wall
The bigger the sin, the harder they fall

Emily

She ran by me and jogged on down the road to the store
Just like she ran from husband and kids before
Left him and them in nothing but a tiny shack
And didn't look back, just kept running like she always did
Felt I should rid her of this world, I hurled the blade
It landed in her back and made a mess of the maid that made messes

Copyright © Karma ... [ 2005-07-22 03:25:00]
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Re: What went around is coming back around (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:35:13 PM AEST
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wow... extremely dark and powerful. i was blown away by this write. you wrote it very well and had the reader wrapped up in it. very nicely done, keep up the good work.

~sprints

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