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Complete
Contributed by
LolaWhite
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:25:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Autumn leaves dancing
I saw the moon shining bright
And it was complete
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LolaWhite
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2005-07-22 00:25:45]
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Re: Complete
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:11:38 AM AEST
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a few words and yet never have i seen so much by hearing so little, very accomondatiing peice of poetry, great 4 the soul . . .
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Re: Complete
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST
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Very nice for your first correct Haiku. Haiku is a beautiful form of Japanese poetry. Google haiku and read about it. It is generally about nature (got that right) but is full of passion in 17 short syllables. One wouldn't think it possible, but it is. Keep working on them. I think you will find it to be quite a challenge and extremely interesting.
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Re: Complete
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:16:30 AM AEST
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Very beautiful.. Lola
oh ya mon.. Haiku it is.. 5-7-5 syllables
very seasonal indeed..
Thank you..
Yours truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: Complete
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:31:33 AM AEST
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| A good haiku my poet and it was a joy to read and you inspired me to write my haiku and give it a try for the first time. Keep up the writes babe. Love always….Steve |
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