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Icy Mountains
Contributed by
Tricky
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:17:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Carving the ice
Shreddig the slope
You feel the board catch
And you contact the ground
The pains unbearable
But you love it
You'd do it all over
Even to just fall
The board slips underneath
You roll down the hill
People pass and laugh
But you don't care
To do what you love
Not many can
You con't get better
Unless you fail
Copyright ©
Tricky
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2005-07-22 00:17:06]
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Re: Icy Mountains
(User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:37:08 AM AEST
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I like this one, too. Optimistic feeling and carefree.
I'm positively giddy at the thought of you writing poetry.
Keep it up... ENCORE!!!
Lylas,
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Re: Icy Mountains
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by Kie on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:37:32 AM AEST
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Initially I read your poem because I like all forms of nostalgia. But, wow--when I read it I was THERE! I really liked the positive way you reflected on falling and you not caring. It sounds like you had a great time.
I couldn't find any fault with this poem and the overall feel was just what I needed this morning.
I hope you have many more trips---so you can write many more like this!
Awesome.
Kie |
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Re: Icy Mountains
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by Sinned on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:17:47 AM AEST
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Short and to the point and convincing.I was thre riding down the icy mountain along side of you face in the snow and you were laughing. Enjoyable write.
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Re: Icy Mountains
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:55:24 PM AEST
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| The misspellings hinder this poem but it captures a snowboarder's high. I liked it. |
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