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I can see the tears
Contributed by
wordsy
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Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can see the tears
or where they left their trace
and I can see the saddness
that there is upon your face
And I can see the pain
that there is inside
the one you try so hard
and still you can not hide
And I can see tomorrow
through the cold dark night
And I can feel the sorrow
of our fading moral light
and I can hear the screams
of the dying and the dead
brought to their own ends
by the kinds of lives they've led
And I can hear the whispers
the ones behind my back
as another one has fallen
and slipped right through the crack
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-01-11 17:20:00]
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Re: I can see the tears
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 05:29:17 PM AEST
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well written ...
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Re: I can see the tears
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 05:49:11 PM AEST
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| Wow ... awesome write. |
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Re: I can see the tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:01:05 PM AEST
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You're on a roll. Wordsy!!!!!
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Re: I can see the tears
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:06:49 PM AEST
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| another great write, you have a true gift, keep up the good work |
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Re: I can see the tears
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by Poetic_Angel on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:12:34 AM AEST
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| great poem!!! |
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Re: I can see the tears
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 02:14:30 AM AEST
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Wow... i loved this, this was very well written
And I can feel the sorrow
of our fading moral light
I loved all this, but those two lines really jumped out and grabbed me 'fading moral light' wow. Wow keep these up
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Re: I can see the tears
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by OreO on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 12:32:22 AM AEST
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What is there to say about this one.....it's left me speechless.....this is beautiful...ah...i have to read it again....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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