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Summer's Eve Beckoning
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:55:21 PM in AEST
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It's midnight.
The moon shines full, round, white...
Calling me, beckoning me...
stop living with my kidgloves on..
momentarily abandon maturity...
come back to simplicity...
to simply... feel.
I slip into the inky blue
embraced by the humid air
for my clandestine tryst with my senes.
Crickets and locusts sing in chorus a moonlight lullabye...
My pristine feet unincumbered by shoes..
Touching prickly blade of grass my feet sink into the soil... cool... earthy.
I lay... finally, not caring...
(Grass stains, what are those?)
my skin... drenched by late night dew.
There, alone... with nothing... just me...
gazing upward...
tree limbs reaching out for the white orb drenching the sky.
Dreams, anxieties and fears slumbering in my wake...
All that incumbers me cast aside-a visit with...
Nothing...
Nothing but solitude.
Finally... for a fleeting moment...
I remember what it is to feel summer.
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Taurusgem1 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:06:20 AM AEST
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| This is probably one ofthe better poem on this site.. Bravo!!! |
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by wizard on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:45:57 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this poem...i felt every word.
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:29:36 PM AEST
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i have to honestly say i kept passing over this
poem cause i feel very intimidated by you, this morning as i scaned the borad 2 comennt on peoples poems the tittle just kept tugging at me like a pesky kid wanting ice cream at a carnival so i gave it a read,
all i can say is to bad u don't write more, it's not only beautiful but so dam discriptive, and
so real feeling, hope u dont mind me commenting on this, lovely peice of poetry . . .
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:36:03 PM AEST
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This poem fills the senses and takes you away , very well done . I love this.
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Kie on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:32:54 AM AEST
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Oh this was so full and expressive. I also read it twice and it was like for a short period of time---I could see summer thru your eyes. But there is something more that I can't express effectively with words---so i'll just tell you that this left quite an impression on me.
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 01:16:22 AM AEST
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A fine piece of work, Emily. It's a lovely picture you've painted, and I'm glad you were able to scribble once more. May that ability continue.
I love the line "stop living with kidgloves on". Much more meaningful than its surface. Bravo!
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 08:30:47 AM AEST
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Boo!!! I liked this Em. The way you used your words was brilliant. Kudos on a lovely write. I'll be back to re-read it again.
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Willofree on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:05:42 PM AEST
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This is a beautifully written poem. There is a softness, peaceful and tender spirit inherent in the emotional tone of the poem. A blend of nature and being.
A gentle spirit, well done
Will |
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:25:41 PM AEST
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Really good poem, Em. I liked it much. Too often we forget about the child inside.
Take care.
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:46:48 AM AEST
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Your use of imagery in this wonderful poem is excellent showing me a clear and beautiful picture as I read your very captivating words. Ahhhhhhhh so beautiful indeed Loved every word of this Excellent job
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Archie on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:36:00 PM AEST
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| You did good. You have a good view of nature. I like your style in this too. |
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:32:24 AM AEST
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Oh the imagery you cast into the readers head. Such a wonderful warm feeling felt after reading such descriptive beautiful words. Always a pleasure to read ur brilliant work Emily.
*hugs*
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Re: Summer's Eve Beckoning
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 05:17:03 PM AEST
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Yes,passionate again but you should never have even mentioned the grass stains...tremendous all the same,
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