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Live, Love, Burn, and Die
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:11:37 PM in AEST
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If you cut me, do I not bleed?
Do I not breathe?
If you hurt me, do I not cry?
When you speak to me, do I not hear you?
When you see me, do I not look back at you?
When you laugh, do I not smile?
When you hold me, do I not love you?
When I scream, do I not feel fear?
When I lie, do I not feel guilt?
When you see me
And you walk by
I am able to see through you
But when you look at me, what is it that you see?
Nothing?
I feel you look right passed me
You're killing me.
You cannot see that I am real
I am not an illusion or a made up fantasy.
I live, I love, I burn, and I die for you.
I will live forever in your mind
Because to you, I will never be real.
Copyright ©
Katie2008
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2005-07-21 23:11:37]
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Re: Live, Love, Burn, and Die
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:56:23 PM AEST
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| awesome! i luvz it! i just feel so sry that you feel that way...it must hurt. i hope you'll be okay. Best wishes! ^ ^ Keep writing! |
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Re: Live, Love, Burn, and Die
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:00:13 PM AEST
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one of those poems that is straight from the heart...i love it. i love the way you wrote...truly amazing
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