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Summer is Candy.
Contributed by
Brandyx7
on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 03:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I am one with
the boiling sun
fire magnetizing
inviting mass
of excitement.
Such aromas filter
like scents of sweet
candy wind of luscious.
Wicked wind
shall sweep softly
along the paths
of each long
strand of hair.
Beads of sweat
glide slowly down,
forming a pool
at the nape
of my neck.
Basking among
the glory of this
devilish summer day,
I shall embrace
the warmth of this
sensual invitation.
For one can
close their eyes
and float away
into the loving
arms of the one
they love, forever
being reminded
of the cool dark
night breeze.
Copyright ©
Brandyx7
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2005-07-21 15:44:19]
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Re: Summer is Candy.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:26:57 AM AEST
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This is a part of you that is most lovely this is
an artist at work what a lovely style, and
beautiful peice of writting realy made an
impact on me very picturesque and to the
point . . .
Ben |
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Re: Summer is Candy.
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by Bob18Dylan on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 11:27:39 PM AEST
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| You couldn't have described summer any better. This is truley a great work. |
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