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Stomping Grounds
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:58:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Field of dreams laid out
in an atmospheric waste
Where the proud walk defiantly
and refuse to give in to faith
Treachery greets, despair creeps
corrupted...jaded like no other
Withstood the test of time
Hope...a long forgotten memory
so distant as not to escape
Actions---a walking paradox
"Please do not reply"
Vengeance floods desire
devours sweet lustful sin
Unknown triumphs, unspoken bumps
Defiance is in order
Run! There's no way out
the moon pitches sorrow into black night
Ungrateful dead stomp the earth
searching for answers they'll never seek
Encumbered by a loss so vague
mere words are not enough...
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-07-21 13:58:02]
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:43:44 PM AEST
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i loved this
and i plan on commenting after i read it again...and think about it some more...for right now...i loved it |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:53:36 PM AEST
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| Not bad but it was very dark. It was worded very well and had a deeper side to it. I had to read it a few times to get the hole meaning or what I thought the meaning was in it. thank you again for your comments on my work and I look forward to more of your writes….Steve |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:39:39 AM AEST
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very nice poem scorp, popped lol out of your head ay? deep and intence this poem is a
dark and enthralling emphisized feeling went through me as i read it . . .
Ben |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 03:15:12 AM AEST
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| Whether refeflective of your mood or not, right, "mere words are not enough". Mere words are not enough on how great your writes are, as well as this one. I will admit that I must read it a few more times to make sure I understand it but right now I just wanted to say it just really sounds....er, um, reads great!!!! |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 07:46:49 AM AEST
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BRAVO! Dear Scorp, this may have just popped into your head, but I've been trying to not to live it for neigh on 68 years. This is just I feel when I try to join the horrible part of our world. Such imagery Scorp, such depth you have touched. Such truths if you look closely. Many peoples are just like this today.
Oh how I loved your last lines, grateful dead. People without feelings stomping around, not caring, completely apathy..........you hit it right on the head. Marvelous write for our day today!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:04:17 PM AEST
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Whoa.. like whoa. that was different from what i've usually read of you.. and very good!! it's full of imagery and actions throughout with a chilly feeling of despair
i loved it and look forward to more!
take care Scorp.
dw |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 09:03:50 AM AEST
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Very dark stuff.
Enjoyed different from your usual writes but no the less still brilliant
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Stomping Grounds
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 6th October 2020 @ 12:20:42 AM AEST
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I just dumped Timmy over this one.🏃🏃🏇
I/'/m getting in my car now and traveling to communist Canada
You know why.... Fantastico....🛀🛀🛀🛀🏄 |
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