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Hidden
Contributed by
deanie
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:32:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hid myself thinking of the person i am
People say they no me but they dont
who am i?
who do i love?
wuts my favorite poem?
you dont no me
you never will
no one nows me
i am hidden for life
my soul stays deep with in
no one nows me and no one will
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deanie
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2005-07-21 13:32:07]
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Re: Hidden
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 09:14:48 PM AEST
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It was a good write of frustration but one day someone
will know you better then you think. My wife can read
my thoughts all the time these days and knows what I
want or am going to say before I say it. One day you’ll
fall in love and meet the love of your life and you’ll
give so much to them that they will know more then
you can imagine. Take care and keep up the writes and
release the pain and frustration from you soul….Steve |
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Re: Hidden
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by Kie on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 08:50:05 AM AEST
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I read your poem and then waited a moment to ponder it and let it absorb. The meaning I did understand, but it must be a lonely place to think that no one in this world knows you at all. I could relate to this on some levels. I don't hide myself and I do let people know me but I have a fear of real intimacy without my guard being up. Like being friendly from a distance but up close and personal I tend to shy away. But i'm thankful someone knows me, who I am beneath the surface. Although this is a rather lengthy comment, I guess your poem touched me on many levels.
There are some spelling errors in your poem. I do know how easy it is to misspell because I do it frequently but, if you would correct them---such as replacing "no me" with "know me" and some capitalizations--it would improve the poem for the readers eye.
I liked your poem and I thank you for sharing this with us.
Kie |
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Re: Hidden
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:23:38 AM AEST
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Oh Nay-nay!! I love you SOOO much!! I'm sorry you feel this bad!! I know how you feel!! I love ya and don't forget your the best cousin EVER!!!!
Love Ya,
Lexy (Lilbabe)
P.S. Read my poem(s) and my journal!!! Call me sometime. Call Juanita and ask for my new #!!!! |
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