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Deaths Storm
Contributed by
sride686
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:10:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dark clouds as thunder strikes
Pain in my heart
That fills me with strife
Rain that falls
As I’m soaked to the bone
Hate in my heart
As I’m left here alone
Left here to die
And suffer with grief
From pain in my heart
My heart starts to grow weak
Waters they rise
As they come like a flood
I try to swim
But my death has begun
Swifter I sink
As my hope starts to fade
Tears start to fall
As my life goes to waste
~Steve~
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sride686
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2005-07-21 13:10:43]
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Re: Deaths Storm
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by LolaWhite on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 05:56:16 PM AEST
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I think you write all poetry well My Steve. This one flows nicely. I know you know that your life is not a waist...you have two girls here that love you very much and can't wait until you return. Another great write from my talented poet!! Love ya,
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Re: Deaths Storm
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:45:03 AM AEST
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this is one of your best i felt paralized reading this, this was more than a poem it was a narration of somthing taking place as i read it very powerful and unsettling, great write . . .
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