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Twisted Black
Contributed by
Tricky
on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:59:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My soul is like a flame
I can't believe my eyes
I see a shadow to my right
It's a figure of twisted lies.
It's so very dark and cold
I can't quite comprehend
It feels like time is frozen
That which we can't mend.
It's coming closer now
I feel its presence grow
What can be going on?
My mind spins to and fro.
Then it passes me quickly
I don't understand why
Then I look behind me
The reason is clear as sky.
Copyright ©
Tricky
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2005-07-21 12:59:42]
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Re: Twisted Black
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 09:20:53 PM AEST
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A good write that flowed very well. There is truth
in this write because sometimes we do miss things
and they are clear to us if only we could open our
eyes and see. It was a good read, keep up the
writes….Steve |
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Re: Twisted Black
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:34:27 AM AEST
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Um... WOW!!!
HELLO!!!! WHY HAVE WE NOT SHARED THIS WITH OUR POET FRIEND BEFORE???
Christen, you're awesome!!
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Twisted Black
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by Tricky on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:51:51 PM AEST
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