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Crying for You
Contributed by
deanie
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:53:34 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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So many times i cried thinking you would make it better
days went went on and i buried myself alive with my pain and fears
scared of the path that will lead me back to you again
everytime i see your face i fall to my knees and my heart melts into tears
i cried to see you once again
what happened to our love we had
the joy and laughter now up in smoke
it's too late for you
im over it now
i dont need you anymore
i dont want you and yet I cant have you
Copyright ©
deanie
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2005-07-21 12:53:34]
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Re: Crying for You
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 09:28:21 PM AEST
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A sad write with so much pain for the love you lost. This is one
of the hardest things to go through the lose of the one you loved.
Twisted thoughts not sure what your feeling in this write. First
you say your over them but then in the last line you still want
them. You say you don’t but at the same time everything says you
do. My thoughts go out for you and feel your pain. One thing
though read through your work a few times before you post them.
There are a few easy mistakes in it that could have been easy fixes
if you would have check your spelling. Take care and keep up the
good writes and release all these thoughts….Steve |
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Re: Crying for You
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by Zandria on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 05:09:59 AM AEST
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I have been here.
This reminded me of that 'there' ... truely.
I totally get the jumble tho...
can't think straight as your choking down everything to appear 'normal'...
Good write. |
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