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Melodious
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
Reside then my mind
alas heart whose kind,
that metaphysical force
a silent code of morse,
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Waft faire winds to you
within my point of view,
Aye, mere soft centering
minds bethought entering,
~
From where I sit
faire 'la melody,
merchant vessel
meant to nestle,
~
Oh, now you hear?
dear core sonneteer,
take hold of; appear!
lifes no longer austere.
~x~
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-01-11 03:00:00]
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Re: Melodious
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by Fwog on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 03:24:46 AM AEST
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Can't understand why it got no reads,
I enjoyed it, especially the last verse.
Very different however.
Hugz
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Re: Melodious
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by aernby on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:27:17 AM AEST
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good write,
well done
it requires work to read,but well worth the effort!
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Re: Melodious
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by nomad on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:01:33 AM AEST
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| This is wonderful, Nessa. Thank you for posting it here so it can be enjoyed, as it was meant to be. I like your cryptic weave of thoughts in this one. |
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Re: Melodious
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:21:11 AM AEST
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i enjoyed it very much Nessa..can't understand why it wasn't read
Shari |
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Re: Melodious
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by spooky on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 09:07:03 AM AEST
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| wellwritten keepmcomin,,,,,,,,spooky |
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Re: Melodious
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 11:23:11 AM AEST
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| lt becomes a little clearer all the time |
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Re: Melodious
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by juliette on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:42:00 PM AEST
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Obviously we like it!! I don't understand why it wasn't read either. It is quite challenging to read and comprehend, but I think that makes it very unique. Wonderful words and a wonderful read! Thanks for sharing!!
juliette |
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Re: Melodious
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by InexactExactness on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 01:11:19 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed the "old english" form of writing you've incorporated in this poem...it causes me to think about what it is that you're saying and then when i think about it i understand it just that much more. It's one of those poems you have to read over and over just to get a deeper sense of what you're talking about...i really enjoyed it...very nice write |
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Re: Melodious
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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Hmm I liked this a very stimulating, short read. Can't think of ne thing new to say that hasn't been said.
Bobo (Joel) |
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