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Save Me
Contributed by
becca_b
on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 07:27:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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They say to talk to someone
But when no ones around
When no one listens.
Who’s there to talk to?
Do they even know what they are talking about?
Do they think they know me better then I do?
Do they know the feeling of a knife being twisted around in your stomach?
Looking at yourself and hating what you see
Feeling disgusted with your self
Feeling hopeless
That you are never going to get what you want
What’s the use in trying?
When there’s nothing to be
What’s there to lose when you have lost everything?
Everyone is so happy
Who do they think they are kidding?
It’s just a mask, it’s all a façade
An act.
Everyone is hiding
To afraid to be who they are inside
To afraid to let anyone find out
Everyone is an actor
You find one person who is truly themselves
You find one and show me
I bet you that you can’t
People say they are themselves
But they are lying
They don’t mean to
Lying is second nature
You do it with out thinking
“Feeling rotten?”
“No, I’m fine” ‘of course you idiot!’
See what I mean?
If there is someone to listen
could I be saved?
Copyright ©
becca_b
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2005-07-21 07:27:38]
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Re: Save Me
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 10:26:42 AM AEST
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Yeah, I agree.Seems like lying is a part of our lives.
This is a really different type of poem...I've never came across any like yours...I find the emotions inside really blinding and right in our face.
It's good, I guess,that the basic theme is so close to our heart. |
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Re: Save Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:13:06 AM AEST
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| A huge part of reality wrapped up in a poem. I like your style. |
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Re: Save Me
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:14:21 PM AEST
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brutally honest and heartfelt stuff....it's good to see such refreshing material!
keep your head high, as well as the fine writing!
dw |
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Re: Save Me
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by jeza on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:59:11 AM AEST
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a very honest poem bec
it is well written with a
beautiful poem with a theme close
to everyone's heart
remember that i will always be here for you
huggs
Jeza |
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